I spend everyday following routine
Life is never changing or so it would seem
The most it ever does is when it gets worse
I sense my time is closer to riding in the hearse
There's no way out now, my fate is all sealed
I dwell on the hurt that just never healed
Now I watch in silence at my final dawn
I empty out my pills, at last the pain is gone
Comments on this poem/writing:
|LinzAy (220.127.116.11) -- Tuesday, May 6 2003, 09:01 am|
I think this may be the shortest of ur i've read...but there goes that remembering stuff thing of mine. It's short but good and makes an impact. Like it :)
|luc (18.104.22.168) -- Tuesday, May 6 2003, 10:46 pm|
nice cuoplets.. good poem
|Leah06 (22.214.171.124) -- Wednesday, May 7 2003, 11:19 pm|
Again this is so awsome! Great writing!
|Pamela (126.96.36.199) -- Friday, May 9 2003, 05:38 pm|
I would be lying if I said I didn't love this poem. I enjoyed this unusual style from you Seizure.
|Seizure (188.8.131.52) -- Saturday, May 10 2003, 09:56 pm|
LinzAy, it's not the shortest. "What I Want to Hear" is shorter... as is, "Fake Smile" and "Again." But it's close.
Luc, Leah06, and Pamela, thanks for the compliments.
|ash (184.108.40.206) -- Monday, July 14 2003, 10:40 pm|
I don't even know how to express my feelings after reading this poem. It was short but touching because i think those exact same things way too often.
|Seizure (220.127.116.11) -- Wednesday, July 16 2003, 01:27 pm|
sorry to hear you can relate to it
|Crimson Angel (18.104.22.168) -- Friday, August 8 2003, 05:18 pm|
I can relate to it too, Seizure, actually, I can relate to it well....very well. Anyway, I just wanted to say nice job...Really into the depressing sort of poetry, so right now, you're like my idol ;) Anyway, very good job.
Your Good Fan,
|Ashley R (22.214.171.124) -- Sunday, November 16 2003, 03:17 am|
With so little words, it means so much. It really makes you think. Good job, Seiz!
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