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A Poem About Me
2 April, 2003
Author: Seizure

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My real name is Josh, but most already knew
That my temper's short, and I'm friends with few
My head's the size of Dallas, the city not the guy
It tends to catch on the wind and raise me in the sky
While I float with birds, I look at the street
Many people down there, are hiding from the heat
So I try to help, by blocking the sun
Now the people come out, and start to have some fun

Now that it is nightfall, the wind starts to die
So I start to decend, down from in the sky
Now I go back home, to check my mail
Oh look some more flames, shit, it never fails
So I write them back, like I always do
And call out their threats, they never carry through
Finally bored with that, I head back outside
I force myslef through the door, my head is just too wide

But now I walk around, and start to climb a hill
There's people up there, just trying to chill
They are making out, and looking at the moon
But my mamoth mellon, looks like an air balloon
Going up the hillside, with a giant face
They were scared shitless, then formed a tight embrace
Don't worry I won't hurt you, I said to the couple
I leaned back too much, my head's weight made me topple

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Comments on this poem/writing:

luc (68.74.119.108) -- Friday, April 4 2003, 04:00 pm

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this was in that poem about ourselves in the forum huh.. i liked it it was funny sorta dont know if that was your intention with this but i twas amusing ^^ good writing seizure
LinzAy (152.163.188.230) -- Friday, April 4 2003, 10:34 pm

''''''

Hehe...very amusing Seizure! Good writing! I like bein abe to laff with your work...it's a nice side of u. Well, left my comment...off i go............
LinzAy (152.163.188.230) -- Friday, April 4 2003, 10:44 pm

omigawd

I just noticed you put your name in this poem! woa!
barb (66.46.230.115) -- Friday, April 4 2003, 11:26 pm

seizure is josh

good writing I didn't kow Josh and Seizure were the same person.
Martin Vann (67.75.177.210) -- Saturday, April 5 2003, 10:56 pm

Will you answer this Q:?

Seiz;

All your work is to me, well, it says much more, than the words I/we read, period!

My question: was this couple on the hill, actually, You and ? someone else?


Martin V
Seizure (67.33.102.4) -- Sunday, April 6 2003, 01:49 am

this one...

Luc, yes, it was from the forum, slightly modified though. And yes, the intention was to be "funny." When I wrote it, I just took 5 minutes of my time and "didn't give a fuck," how it turned out, so I just started writing and out that came. It was like a brainstorm of me not caring what came out.

LinzAy, glad you enjoyed reading that work. It was written months ago, I just finally submitted it because I didn't want to just leave people hanging with only two news ones after I took this long. Actually... I submitted a fourth one entitled, "Music,' but Dreamer didn't put it up for whatever reason. Oh well...

Barb, yes, Seizure and Josh are the same person. I wanted to keep it secret and I managed for the first few years I was here, but then J came on and spit who I was to everyone. What I wanted kept secret was already ruined. So now I don't care... it's already out of the bag.

V, while most of my writings do have deeper meaning, this one, sadly, does not. As I said to Luc, this was just a five minute brainstorm written months ago about "whatever." I didn't care what it's content included. I was actually pissed off when I wrote it so I glorified some parts about me. Although some of this poem is truth, like coming home and getting more death threats almost on the daily, the rest is all just pulled out of nowhere. You don't have to think about this one, I think you got the message I was portraying.

Later everyone.
barb (66.46.241.211) -- Wednesday, April 9 2003, 02:27 am

confused

but siezure wasn't it josh that called me chicky and you stuck up for me he thought that beating a girl was funny.
barb (66.46.241.211) -- Wednesday, April 9 2003, 02:30 am

dark side

Josh must be the dark side of seizure.the light side of seizure is nicer.
Seizure (67.33.102.4) -- Wednesday, April 9 2003, 07:52 am

Barb

Uhh... no... that was J... otherwise known as Jake. You should re-read those comments. They are still there.
barb (66.46.230.93) -- Wednesday, April 9 2003, 04:10 pm

got it

ok I understand now seizure blond moment I guess Ha Haa
katrina (213.122.88.175) -- Sunday, November 16 2003, 08:26 pm

A Poem about Me

hey! I've read lotsa your poems and i have to say ...... Well Done!!!!!!! You have written from the heart keep it up:)
 
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