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I'll Go Away
Author: Seizure

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Why are you so quiet? Just what are you thinking?
Your eyes are watering, what's that you're drinking?
Please just tell me the truth, I really want to help you
You've known me a while, you know what I say is true
I love you so much now, I hate to see you like this
Did something bad happen? Is there something you miss?
Please just say something, you're making me worry
I came as soon as I could, you told me to hurry
I can tell from your look, that it involves us both
And that it is something, that affects our growth
I think I know the anwser, but you have to tell me
So I don't assume wrongly, and you set my worries free
I know I'll have to go soon, because it's getting late
So tell me what's going on, so we can get this straight

So I see you hate me, so fine I'll go away
I will leave you alone, starting with today
You won't have to see me, you won't have to care
You won't have to worry, we're no longer a pair
If this will make you happy, then I'm all for it
And all this that I feel, was a fire that you lit
I cherish at least that much, what turned you so cold?
I remember you saying, we would both grow old
Together very happy, together until the end
But now there's this hurt, a hurt I cannot mend
I don't know what to do, I think it must be fate
That everybody leaves me, that I bring out hate
I'm sorry I can't please you, I'm sorry that I tried
When you said you loved me, I guess you must have lied

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Britney (67.136.121.12) -- Monday, February 7 2005, 03:07 am

I love this poem GIRL!

This is truley a great poem!!!!!! This is so true I feel this way kinda towards a person!
~Britney~
Nicole (67.136.121.12) -- Monday, February 7 2005, 03:09 am

Awesome!!!

I love this poem it is so true and awesome. I may not feel this way about a guy, but i feel this way about a friend!!!!
Nicole
Britney (67.136.121.12) -- Monday, February 7 2005, 03:10 am

sorry

I think your a guy I was tripping when I said girl but if your a guy sorry!
Nichole Morrin (10.0.2.55) -- Tuesday, March 14 2006, 03:01 pm

using your poem

may i use your poem please because i did stuff with this kid and people found out and told everone so know he hates me and i want him to know that i will leave him alone but i still love him. i really like your poem it is really good and sweet. Thanks nichole
Seizure (134.78.110.18) -- Wednesday, March 15 2006, 04:07 pm

sure...

That's fine Nichole. And yes, Britney, I am a guy.
denise (69.117.217.204) -- Friday, December 29 2006, 04:32 pm

i love this poem!!!!!

it goes with and my man carlos he been acting so weird..
 
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