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Who Would Of Thought A Love So Pure
Author: AJ

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The love you fealt could not be real, for it is no act of true love that one would appeal, lavish themself in a senseless thrill, that night that i chose to call your phone, i knew what had happend .. i could feel it from your tone. How dare you use all that i could give, to hell with love, my hearts no longer submissive. If its those days of my holding you close, tenderly kissing you telling you "your the one i love most", well wait not a day more, "my love", for the passion you seek has fallen dead on the floor. sickly enough to die by your hands, wait, thats not right, was not your hands that betrayed me, some other part of you did, parts should i say? but what should i care? You of all people are in no poise to cry guiltless, its your self loving personality you miss and only this. So remember me my love, upon every night you dare. For my soul will rip every last bit of you bare. No longer shall you lie, no more will i submit. That night was the last youll reap of me you sick demented ....., so think of me darling, ne'r forget me my love. For your the last thing on earth that ill ever care of.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Sarah Taurus (64.57.107.148) -- Thursday, November 27 2003, 09:54 pm

wow

This is a strong poem and I like the words that you have chosen... Keep writing cuz I enjoyed this one... and can I ask you a question... Is this a Real felt poem or made up>>?? j/w but tell me I wanna know... okie dokie bye
Aj (66.120.161.217) -- Tuesday, December 9 2003, 05:29 am

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Yea its real. My girlfriend i devoted everything in the world to cheated on me and acted as though it were nothing...she wrote me a poem as an email. This was my response.
brittany (209.106.65.252) -- Tuesday, May 2 2006, 04:27 pm

i feel the same

this poem reminds me alot of me and how things are going right now and if you so not mind i would like to use this poem to give to my boyfriend to show him how i feel
 
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