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I Wish
20 July, 2003
Author: Shana

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I wish I could have seen you
I wish I could of held you
Kissed you showed you how much I loved you
Even though I didn't meet you
I wish you could of came home
I wish I could have seen you open your eyes, crawl,
Take your first step or say that first word that would be to impress
You're a little angel that really didn't get to spread his wings
Now you going to be in heaven looking upon us
Watching your mom and your siblings
'Cause one day you'll be with them all together

------- Author's Notes -------

To The Little Angel I Didn't Get To Meet
Joel Maleek Suren
R.I.P
June 29, 2003

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Terrie* (65.135.86.155) -- Saturday, July 26 2003, 06:20 am

sad but beautiful...

Shana, your loss was very recent...i am so.....sorry....bless your heart...i lost 5...all males....but way before i reached 6 mo. in my pregnancy.... but...i'm happy to say that i conceived 2x since then...God blessed me w/1 of ea. now they are 23 & 21........this was so sad ..thank you for sharing such a warm and expressive poem w/us.....
Shana (170.235.1.109) -- Tuesday, November 25 2003, 06:41 pm

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i see what your saying maybe i wasn't clear it wasn't my son he was my first nephew. sorry it took me so long to respond but i was away. The child was my sisters her first son.
Angel Laney (76.9.68.231) -- Sunday, August 1 2010, 05:18 am

lovely

Thank you for writing this. It is very touching and I feel for your loss.
 
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