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Faded
Author: Simik

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She didnt see me again
it hurt me to leave like i did
just walk away without a second look
she did what she did, and nothing more
my friends are gone
all is lost
everyone fears me truly most
i dont deserve it
my psychotic feeling
it overtakes me deeply diving
my depression i share
my addictions i give
i dont want to deal with it anymore
the only path is to die alone
on the floor, dispairing more
feelings of life begin to fade
a lost memory
friendship
gone away
forever
i walk more into the way
car coming my way
the breaks slam
i dont turn my head
just thinking about it instead
pray for a semi
i get a jeep
my body drops
my heart pops
and forever
im faded...

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diav (147.9.177.76) -- Sunday, September 28 2003, 05:19 pm

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don't you dare feel this way.
Firr (69.157.226.190) -- Saturday, June 19 2004, 11:16 am

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very nice. too sad but in the same time, so much similar to what i used to do.
 
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