Deeply Looking
Author: Simik


A perfect time is within my mind
Not seeable to a mortal eye, as time begins to bind
My heart begins to pump as if it was a reaction
To those soothing things you say and a coming action

Somebody once said that life is only mortal
but death is for immortal souls
My soul is amongst the many whom will never
see the light of day or the breath of many nights
On this day of cheer my heart begins to race,
Beating ever faster, as if keeping a pace

My last dying wish, an mortal persons plea,
To die within a short time, not eternity
My life is to boring, withering before me
So just leave, for I am not interesting

If your still reading, blame you I can not
An interesting trouble this poetic heart
Do not leave me stained, beaten or bruised
My last undying wish to die along with you


Comments on this poem/writing:

angelina ( -- Wednesday, June 18 2003, 05:34 pm


can i please your peom. its butiful!
Simik ( -- Thursday, June 19 2003, 12:41 am

go ahead

copy it down ( dont know how else i'm going to let you use it) as long as you give me the credit, i'll be glad to let u use it. ( unless it's for a school thing, those things could be ruined by giving credit in witch case you still have permision to use)
diav ( -- Sunday, September 28 2003, 05:11 pm

no title

you will die with me many many times
Name:                                           Remember Me

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