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Far Away Place
Author: Simik

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where is this place
is it real
final

im lost within it
somthing so false
or am i still lost

darkening, it is
even my body is gone
nothing more wrong

somthing within me
projecting this place for me
lost still within my space

its gone within a dream
my lost mind within this place
nothing more then my hate

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Leah06 (12.232.5.189) -- Tuesday, May 6 2003, 11:01 pm

This could be a song..

This could be a good song! Nice job!
 
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