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Mom!
Author: Snaps

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i hate my mom and i dont know why
everytime we start to talk i just want to cry
it never seems to get better
my love for her gets lesser and lesser
i sit in my room and wonder why?
i was put on this earth to cry and cry
i dont think she knows the pain i endure
i really dont know im really not sure
my arms are just scars from battles before
they are wounds that wont heal there is a pain like an ope soar
i just look at the oh "so beautiful scars"
and i really start to think "will i go that far"
will she push me to the edge or my pain
oh will she oh will she make me die in vain
i dream of the blood from that last slice i do
i dream of the place that will take me far from her and you
my life is just a bitter sweet tragedy
my life was from her and given to me
i wonder what would of happened if i died in her womb
if i would of died and been barried in a tomb
i can never show her the scars she made me do
i can never tell her the pain she put me through
so now i die in silence like so many times before
so now i leave her with some of my pain for her now to endure

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Brenda Michelle (209.178.170.150) -- Tuesday, April 8 2003, 04:50 pm

REMEMBER...............

remember that your mother is all you really have in life to take care of you. i can relate to what you are saying. i am 16 and i been down that road before. trust me take care of yourself and your mother. i lost my mom when i was 10 yrs. old. i always fighted with her and argued, and every time i would get mad i would cut myself. now i am left with these nasty scars and no mother. so cutting myself basicly didnt solve anything it just made it worse. so i leave you with a bit of advice...... remember your mom is all you have.

P.s i love your self expression and the way you speek out your anger. it just help you more!!!!!!!!!! great poem.
fxc (24.72.92.94) -- Monday, April 14 2003, 07:56 pm

xv

there has 2 be a root probelm i sugest you figure out what that is talkto somebody about it and than get counseling and than maybe after youve talked to your mom (with some 1 else) about how much your hurting and that you dont want to hurt anymore athn you should both get counseling well just a suggestion
fxc (24.72.92.94) -- Monday, April 14 2003, 07:56 pm

xv

there has 2 be a root probelm i sugest you figure out what that is talkto somebody about it and than get counseling and than maybe after youve talked to your mom (with some 1 else) about how much your hurting and that you dont want to hurt anymore athn you should both get counseling well just a suggestion
lost.... (207.35.140.160) -- Sunday, December 7 2003, 05:09 am

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i don't know if the person that wrote this, feels what they are saying, but I feel as though the words you wrote is the only way to describe how I feel at this very moment I love my mother... I really do but I don't think she knows the things she outs me through... I was crying before I read your pome, I'm crying so hard now i can bearly see the words on the screen... i beleive things will get better, but eventually they always go back to the way they were, I'm 16 I think that no one at that age should feel this way but the world we live in now is messed up.... You write in wonderful ways, a very meaningful thing to the right person, thank you for that...
 
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