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Silence
Author: Bench

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There is silence...
No exchange of words,
Wondering what went wrong.
Was it something I said,
Or didn't say?
Was it something I did,
Or didn't do?
And the silence deafens me
Slowly, everyday.
To see you yet not seeing.
To hear you yet not hearing.
To be with you
Yet like we are worlds apart.
And the silence kills me
Slowly, everyday.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

KitKatrina (68.113.60.103) -- Tuesday, February 3 2004, 08:02 pm

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This poem is very unique. I loved it. I like the lines "Was it something I said, Or didn't say? Was it something I did, Or didn't do?" And also "To see you yet not seeing, To hear you yet not hearing.." It was great, keep it up, I like all your poems...
bench (192.168.0.172) -- Thursday, February 5 2004, 01:08 am

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thanks so much. your poems are great too!
 
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