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My Time To Go
Author: Tammy

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An Angel touched my shoulder,
it felt so truely devine.
The only thing I didn't know,
it had now became my time.
She held me tightly in her arms,
and wiped away my tears.
I told her I wasn't ready,
I had so many more years.
She told me Jesus needed me, that
he needed me right away.
So off we went up to the sky on
a beautiful summers day.
We got to the golden gates, they
opened up so wide.
My Grandpa walked up to me, and said
now you can come inside.
Oh what such beauty! There was
beauty all around.
I seen all my loved ones,
I heard the trumpets sound.
Everyone was dancing, the Angels
guiding my way.
I walked up to Jesus
he reached out both his hands,
and took a hold of mine.
He said today My Child you came home,
because it was your time.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Keith (10.2.10.15) -- Monday, March 22 2004, 01:09 pm

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This is a very beautiful poem, I love the way the poem flows, and the description of being taken up to heaven was perfect!
Meridian (64.12.116.201) -- Monday, March 22 2004, 06:29 pm

I agree

When the trumpet sounds; When God cracks the sky; no more tears; I'm telling this world goodbye..........
Sorry Tammy, just got caught up in this poem; forgot where I was at. I can almost type in Tammy's lyrics at aol.com and might come across this excellent, extravagant poem. You could be nominated or win a Grammy for this one! You go girl!!!!!!!!!!

Tammy!
Tammy (66.38.5.169) -- Wednesday, March 24 2004, 12:11 am

Meridian, and Keith

thank you so much Meridian for your comments...I am speechless.
you are truely a wonderful writer, and I love your poetry...I hope to read alot more of your work. Thanks so much!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Also thank you keith I love your work to, you both are truely awesome writers....Thanks I am so glad you liked it, I hope to read alot more of your work to.
everett (209.240.207.249) -- Thursday, March 25 2004, 06:16 am

Beautiful

Tammy you really are a talented writer. this was beautiful!
Tammy (66.38.4.92) -- Thursday, March 25 2004, 06:45 am

Thank Again Everett

Thank you again...I really like it, but after i read it over I relized my ending didn't come out the way I wanted...I guess sometimes our minds click off to somewhere else, LOL
barb (66.46.241.43) -- Friday, March 26 2004, 12:52 am

this is beautiful

thanks for writing such a beautiful poem. you described what we all hope it's like. :))))))))))))
Tammy (66.38.6.148) -- Friday, March 26 2004, 01:03 am

Thank You Barb

Thank you Barb for your wonderful comments...I am truely glad you liked it. Your Comments mean so much!!!!!!
marty henry (68.118.150.100) -- Thursday, April 8 2004, 01:40 am

(BEAUTIFUL) my time, our time

yes Tammy we will walk on streets of gold and hear other stories never told. I know when it's your time the gates will open wide with your Grandpa by your side.

your words are a blessing from GOD.
THANK YOU
Tammy (66.38.4.68) -- Thursday, April 8 2004, 03:33 am

Thanks Marty Henry

Thanks so much for your wonderful comments...I love poetry, and your writing is truely beautiful. Again thanks for the comments!!!!
John Foster (62.254.59.156) -- Wednesday, May 12 2004, 06:21 am

Excellent

Not only the storyline, but nice rhyme and meter as well. Liked this one..
Tammy (66.38.4.234) -- Wednesday, May 12 2004, 08:06 am

Mr Foster

Thanx for your COMMENTS!!!!!
 
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