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My Savior
13 February, 2004
Author: Tammy

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When life leaves my body,
and death takes control.
Hold on to me gently, until
I finally let go.
When the echoes of the Angels
find my spirit free.
I will soar up to the sky
My Savior waits for me.
I will be at ease, and pain
shall be no more.
There I will be standing
at Heaven's holy door.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Tammy (66.38.6.136) -- Sunday, February 15 2004, 07:42 am

A Sad Time

We lost 3 teenagers from our town in a traggic accident,Two of them were supose to graduate this year. The 2 boys I did not know, but the girl I knew her, and her family for years. This young lady was truely an angel. I wrote this poem because of them. The loss of a child would have to be the most hardest thing in this life to ever try to face. So this poem is for the three angels who left this life behind to go to another.
Ems (64.12.116.201) -- Sunday, February 15 2004, 06:06 pm

Tammy...

I'm so sorry about your loss. This was a beautiful poem, and Im sure each of those teens are standing with Jesus, watching over you and your town right now! You'll get through this. God Bless~~Emily
Tammy (66.38.6.60) -- Sunday, February 15 2004, 06:38 pm

Ems

Thank you for your comment on my poem, I can't imagine what these childrens parents are going through, but they are truely in my prayers.
Tammy F (65.142.96.126) -- Sunday, February 22 2004, 07:15 pm

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this is a really heartfelt poem god will wrap his arms around each of them teens family remember god is with everyone no matter what pain you may come across
Tammy (66.38.6.141) -- Saturday, March 13 2004, 07:13 pm

Thanks Tammy F

Thank ya girl for your comments on my poem.
marty henry (68.118.145.213) -- Saturday, March 20 2004, 02:46 am

no more pain

your words are a work of art, i thank you from the bottom of my heart.

God Bless
Tammy (66.38.4.96) -- Saturday, March 20 2004, 06:03 am

marty henry

Wow thanks for your comment on my poem, I am speechless! No one has ever called my words a work of art. this poem was wrote for those 3 teenagers who traveled to that beautiful place in the sky. Again thanks for your comment.
Keith (10.2.10.201) -- Thursday, April 8 2004, 03:28 pm

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I love the way all of your poems flow, and the way you describe the transition from death to eternal life is so beautiful. I hope when I die it happens just as you described.
Tammy (66.38.6.227) -- Thursday, April 8 2004, 09:57 pm

Thanks Keith

Thank you so much for your wonderful comments...This poem really is special to me,
 
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