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Goodbye, But Please Don't Cry
18 September, 2003
Author: Tasha

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Respect what you have, before its gone
Because all i have left, is a picture drawn.
For all he did was say goodbye,
And tell me please, not to cry
He passed on, but never will be forgotten
For now hes gone, i feel so rotten.
I loved him, with all my heart,
He was funny, cute, talented, and smart.
He was my best friend, and i loved him too,
But now he well never no, that my love was true.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

kayz (192.168.3.252) -- Tuesday, September 7 2004, 02:35 pm

wow tasha

that was a really amazing poem. im sorry for your loss, and i hope you are able to get through the pain and suffering. im sure there are many people that are willing to listen and be there for you. keep up the good writing.
Terrie* (65.150.170.5) -- Tuesday, September 7 2004, 02:55 pm

Tasha, i feel your words deep down...

a long time ago...
i too was in your shoes
and know the feelings as you
Believe me sweetie....he knew you LOVED him..
he knew..
may your memories be your strength
and your love and faith be your guide
this is very heart touching
and close to home
Meridian (152.163.253.8) -- Tuesday, September 7 2004, 08:04 pm

tears

Oh woosh! This poem was something! Every word read made me feel remorse for your pain. It's very difficult to hear about death of a love.

Nice words!
Smiles,
Meri
 
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