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Igloo
16 January, 2004
Author: TedBeck

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Half of my being,
I can no longer retrieve,
My friends they don’t see it,
I could never deceive,

If you heated an igloo,
The mess it would leave,
You’d say “That’s an igloo!”
No-one could believe,

Like an igloo melted,
And the reason I’d breathe,
Part of me is invisible,
She just had to leave.

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Gemma 12 (82.0.156.134) -- Friday, January 23 2004, 07:14 pm

Beautiful

your poem really touched my heart
TedBeck (81.78.156.197) -- Friday, January 23 2004, 11:14 pm

Beautiful

Thank you! I'm touched that you're touched :)
 
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