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My Man
24 March, 2004
Author: Terrie*

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My man is so very
caring loving and sweet
he sings me melodies no one can beat
he holds my heart in his hands
he really understands

My man is rare
one of a kind
simply hard to find
his lips linger with such a sweet sensual taste
my lips allow nothing to go to waste

My man's mesmerizing voice
echoed and entered my veins
headed straight to my brain
his presence touched my heart
right from the very start

My man took a loving hold on me
he holds the key
that unlocks feelings I hide
deep deep down inside

My man is the only one for me
no matter how far he may be
for him I shall wait
doesn't matter how late

My man is the one I want to see
all these years he faithfully waited for me
when he is out of sight
for him i will wait proudly straight into the night

My man keeps me elated
words have not yet been created
to describe my man with an angelic touch
his love means so so much

My man melts my heart
as I describe to you what is real
straight into your hearts you too will feel
the embrace that he leaves on me
with the naked eye you could feel and see the love that is deep inside of me


My man a precious gift given to me
an awesome man is he
nothing else could be more perfect
Gods choice for me I totaly accept and respect

For the wonderful loving gift that could ever possibly be
The Man that God gave to me

------- Author's Notes -------

My Husband was A true romantic ...
He always seemed to bring out the best of my romantic side into the light..
with his love ,he molded me into who i am today..
the poetry that we shared was plenty

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Meridian (152.163.252.136) -- Tuesday, March 23 2004, 04:40 pm

Alright now

You make me smile after reading this poem you've submitted! You aren't lucky, you're blessed to find such a inspiring, loving, and devoted man! Love is definitely in the air! Have fun now, and.........

Live each day with expectation
Meridian
Terrie* (65.135.87.115) -- Tuesday, March 23 2004, 05:15 pm

Meridian....

Thank you for reading/commenting...
you are absolutely correct..I was very BLESSED to Have shared a life w/such an inspiring,loving/devoted man...i live each and every day to the fullest...he is remains alive in my heart...have a beautiful day!!!
Terrie*
barb (209.112.22.69) -- Friday, March 26 2004, 10:24 pm

he is blessed too

to have someone that appreciates all our good points is why he treated you so nice. You gave to him appreciation and love. So he gives it back to you.This poem just proves that you get what you give. very nice terrie.
Terrie* (65.148.208.92) -- Saturday, March 27 2004, 01:57 am

Barb,

Thank you so much Doll,i love your comment..indeed he was a true blessing in my life ..unfortunantly his mission was over at a very early age, and short into our marriage , he moved on to the next realm..without
hesitation he has made it tough (just thinking of him)..yet helpful in so many ways that have.. helped me to move on ..he has fullfilled my needs to the max..thank you once again...have a blessed day!! Terrie*
barb (209.112.22.69) -- Saturday, March 27 2004, 04:02 am

sorry Terrie

oh Terrie I'm sorry for your loss, but sometimes our grief brings out our best.It has you.
Terrie* (65.135.86.85) -- Saturday, March 27 2004, 06:13 pm

Barb,

Oh sweetie don't be sorry, do not ever be sorry...for me be happy .... this happened 13 years ago.besides who was i to stand in his way,to go on to a better horizon.. his life was fullfilled he came to do his mission. at first i was bitter and angry because i was left w/two young ones..but then there had to be a reason, he did come into my life ( he made a major improvement in it at the time i didn't know that i needed him in my life, i wasn't looking for someone definite then..but guess what God lead him into it, and i'm thankful for every moment we shared..it indeed made me into a tough cookie :)
he left me the best gifts of himself... two pleasant/beautiful/respectful children...a daughter & a son, whom have battled the storm w/me..( it was them that carried me thru it and have continued to be there for me...) thank you again..
God Bless You!!! Always ,Terrie*
Tricia (198.248.198.17) -- Monday, March 29 2004, 05:30 pm

always the best

Terrie,
Girl you touched my heart with this one like so many others before. Right now im going threw a hard time in life. Newly wedd:S but this poem just hit home, made me stop and think and be thankful once more for what i have in life. Thanks terrie god bless girl.
Tricia
Terrie* (65.150.170.121) -- Wednesday, March 31 2004, 04:48 am

Tricia,

Thank you!! you are forever giving me heads up praises...i'm glad this one touched your heart..we all go thru a hard time whenever we have to adjust thru any changes, from moving ,newlyweds, birth,death almost anything...you will make it doll..our better half always seems to know what bothers us, they'd stop the world on it's axle if they could...the little things they do, add up...you both are truely blessed..i know i was....and because he left me w/so many wonderful memories..i am still forever very blessed...thank you once again for commenting..have a lovely evening!!! Always, Terrie*
barb (66.46.230.51) -- Tuesday, April 6 2004, 03:50 pm

good thoughts

It's so nice to read happy thoughts. You have a good attitude. Positive not negative. thank-you very much for seeing the good also, not just the bad.
John Foster (62.254.59.156) -- Saturday, April 24 2004, 04:35 pm

memories

No one really forgets....He is still in your heart....
Terrie* (65.148.215.182) -- Sunday, April 25 2004, 04:36 am

John,

True...so very true...no one really ever forgets... in their absence/remain in our hearts..thank you soo much for reading/commenting Terrie*
 
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