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The Way That I Loved You
Author: Terrie*

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The way that I loved you
the way that I cared
the way that you made me feel

If I could for just one more day
Make a wish
Id make a wish to rewrite that final day
and make it last an eternity

A part in my life
Id never delete
the reason the purpose
that you crossed my path for the third time
was something unexplainable
but yet something so sensual I felt deep in my soul

the way that I cared
If I could for just one more day
Revive that strength that we had
Breathe into you a new breath of life
Id do it in a heart beat

Am I wise for loving you so deep?
Am I wise for the moments to cherish ?
I want forever to keep
Am I wise to continue this love for you?
And keep you in my heart till the end of time?

If only I could turn back time I would
I could never stop loving you
the way that I do
You remain in my heart
In my veins and in my flesh

The way that I cared for you remains
A big part in my world
The way that I loved you
Continues to make me sigh
The way that I loved you
With the world Id happily share

The way that I loved you
was perhaps an addiction
stronger than a drug
a contagious feeling safer than a virus
a feeling more final than death

the way that i want you
now that you are gone
Makes my lonely heart ache
you've become my forbidden fruit
i can no longer touch hold or have

The way that I loved you
continues up until eternity
You are my yesterday
my today
and my tomorrow

You are the feeling
That remains
in the way that I loved you

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Clive (63.184.1.71, 20) -- Wednesday, February 4 2004, 04:23 am

This Is Great

You are so good with words Terrie, Like you I am thankful for the gift of memory, all those times we have go into special boxes in our mind that we call memories. Sorry for your loss, Thank you for your words so touching, I felt them all each one
Terrie* (65.148.230.24) -- Thursday, February 5 2004, 01:02 am

Clive...

thank you....your comments are always very sweet....i enjoy reading your poetry just as well...yes "memories" something that no other can take away or replace.i survived my loss of 13 years w/the help of a few good supportive couples i thank God for them every day
God bless you ...have a good day!!! Terrie*
Mallisa (24.117.24.195) -- Tuesday, February 10 2004, 08:21 pm

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nice verry nice!!
i love it:-D
n thank u for the comments
Terrie* (65.148.209.143) -- Friday, February 13 2004, 01:07 am

Mallisa....

thanx a bunch....and your very welcomed ( you've got great poetry posted) Terrie*
Ems (205.188.208.140) -- Friday, February 13 2004, 01:32 am

great!

Terrie, this was so good and so sad! Even when someone is a memory, we still love them as strongly as ever! I really liked how you described you love as stronger than a drug...really cool! God Bless~~Ems
Tammy (66.38.54.232) -- Friday, February 13 2004, 10:15 am

( very touching )

your poem touches me deeply. I am so sorry for your loss, it is so hard when we lose the ones we love,but they always remain with us deep inside our hearts. Our
memories give us strength to keep us going. God bless you, and may the angels watch over you always.
Terrie* (65.135.86.219) -- Friday, February 13 2004, 04:28 pm

Tammy....

thank you for reading/commenting...perhaps i should of clarified that...i survived my loss of 13 years...13 years ago...sorry 'bout that my poems are brought for the first time to share w/others that share the same.......my poems have helped me get thru perhaps the roughest time in my life they have helped me deal w/it in ways that no one else could reach me..
thank you so much for your input..i appreciate it very much..thanx,Terrie*
Terrie* (65.135.86.219) -- Friday, February 13 2004, 04:31 pm

Ems...

thanx sweetie, i enjoy your comments as i do your poems...there is so much poetry posted...i do need to read/post a comment soon...God Bless You!!! Terrie*
 
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