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Peace
Author: Bench

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The wall has been torn down
The gap has been bridged
The barrier has been shaken
The language has been merged

The hill over there
Is not a fence
Between us any longer

Nuclear arms have been disabled
Treaties have been strengthened
Peoples have been united
Countries have been forged

The hill over there
Is not a fence
Between us any longer

Decisions are made in haste
Peoples' lives are lost
War is a such waste
When life we should cherish the most

The hill over there
Is not a fence
Between us any longer

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Terrie* (65.148.232.61) -- Thursday, September 25 2003, 03:01 am

Good one Bench....

i like this ...i felt/seen the strong message in each stage...keep writing...
ashley nb (12.223.235.93) -- Saturday, September 27 2003, 09:37 pm

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i liked this one as well. the part about the hill not being a fence any longer.. that was great as well. keep up the good work!
Bench (192.168.0.172) -- Wednesday, October 1 2003, 12:50 am

thanks!

terrie/ashley

Thanks so much guys. Your comments inspire me to write more.
 
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