I've Fallen by Terrie*

I do not know how? it happened
I do not know why?
all I know is that I have ...
I have...
become crazy about you

Iv'e grown so madly
I've grown....
madly in love with you
is that totally insane ?
or is that an alright cool thing?

the first time..
the very first time you held my hand
as we walked side by side
you wanted to be closer, so you wrapped your arm around me
you stroked my long black hair strand by strand
as we walked closely in the sand

you finger spelled love words on my back
we closed our eyes and played a guessing game
9 out of ten times our answers matched

we stopped and you pulled me in closer to you
kissing me for the first time...
help me ..
you've captured my heart
help me...
I've fallen in LOVE with you...
did I over step any lovers law?
If so.....
I hope I'LL get a lifetime sentence w/you...

KitKatrina (68.113.60.103) -- Thursday, December 11 2003, 02:42 am

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Very cute Terrie. I liked it a lot. Especially the very last line. Well all the lines were great, good job.

Terrie* (65.148.233.217) -- Friday, December 19 2003, 05:08 pm

Thank you Kit...
i appreciate your comment..i'm glad you enjoyed this one. Terrie*

LinzAy (205.188.209.73) -- Sunday, December 28 2003, 08:55 am

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Really good writing :)

Terrie* (65.135.87.153) -- Sunday, December 28 2003, 05:41 pm

LinzAy
'aye thanx...glad ya thought it was good. enjoy your days!! Terrie*

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