Everything I Dreamed
Author: AJ


I love everything about you
i even love youre grin,
i love it when you look at me,
as though we did some sin,
i love the way you gaze at me,
i love the way you talk,
i love everything about you,
hell i like the way you walk.
My entire world rests beside you,
its youre own choice to let me in,
ill force nothing upon you,
be it sweet or be it grim,
i love that you do love me,
yet i fear how long will stay,
although you tell me time and time,
i fear you dont feel the same way.
I'll give you all i have,
hell ill give you all i get,
if you promise to stay beside me,
and assure youre love wont slip.
I'll wait for you forever,
be it year right after year,
if you find some way to show me,
help conquer this fear.
Many times have i been broken,
gathered the pieces of my heart,
but with you rests my hopes and dreams,
of a beautiful new start.
So promise me, no prove to me,
that youll always be mine,
and i swear to you my love is yours,
untill the end of time.


Comments on this poem/writing:

Leah06 ( -- Tuesday, May 27 2003, 12:44 am


This is the perfect propasal! Awsome poem but imagine it as a proposal! Beyond amazing! I am toattaly in love with this poem! Great work!
LinzAy ( -- Tuesday, May 27 2003, 05:32 am


Great poem :D Sweet.....
Aj ( -- Thursday, May 29 2003, 10:22 pm


This is dedicated to my love, my all, my world, my girl , love you Val. ~Aj.
Heather ( -- Thursday, July 17 2003, 05:47 am

teh poem-ness

AWWWWWWWWWWW!! *sniffle* Glad you found her. ^^
XoForeverXo ( -- Friday, March 19 2004, 03:44 am

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Yeh this is a great poem! i love it so much! especially the ending!!! =)
Meridian ( -- Friday, March 19 2004, 04:42 pm


AJ, something to make your girl smile about! Nice one!
LinzAy ( -- Friday, April 30 2004, 07:18 pm


I love this poem :)
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