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Let's Run Away
Author: Terrie*

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let's run away,in this dream of mine
time to get away
far....far..... away,let's run away
forever I will remain,by your side
to fullfil your desires & needs
through-out the night
I love you too , as much as you love me
oh ..how my heart quivers
when you whisper my name
the way you caress my bare shoulder with your tender touch
pressing your flesh up against mine
lifes too short, to put it off
for another day,
let's escape, hold my hand...hold it tight
listen to the beat,of my heart
be my guide
thank you for this precious, moment in time
let's dance, till the end of time
while the stars still shine
and the moon adorns the heavenly sky
as watch your body glisten under the moonlight
I enter a world of paradise
each second I spend with you
let's not spoil my dream
it will be my one dream,
I never want to awaken or be taken away from
so together let's runaway tonight
and live an endless dream...
but if I happen to wake up
do not be surprised
if your awaken by my touch
the fire in me is a sure thing
the feelings that roar inside
are very much alive and ready to burst
remember you’re the man of my dreams that brought this beast to life....

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Martin Vann (171.75.220.166) -- Saturday, October 11 2003, 07:50 pm

The fire in you, burns, within me...,

Terrie,

You are beast, that lives in me, and many more I think, and to run away with you, would be a dream come true. Yet, this is just a poem, heated and layed down, by your poet's pen. I for one, would love you more, than within the moon-light's opportunity. Come, noon, with the sun above, "I" would whisper in your ear, I love you to, and thank you for this dream, once again, let me be with you, and continue, with this dream.

MartinV
Later, time for a cold, cold, shower, WOW!
Terrie* (65.136.7.143) -- Sunday, October 12 2003, 12:14 am

run away with me Martin.....

thank you for your comment..you feed into my dream and keep it alive....it is getting a bit warm over at my end..it must be my computer putting off that excessive heat and blowing it off in my direction :) your too much Martin..thanx...
Pamela (66.38.146.7) -- Sunday, October 12 2003, 11:27 pm

Sensual

Your poems are so sensual Terrie, I find that they bring it out in me when I read them! So beautifully put I can't even compete by writing a nice comment :O)
Terrie* (65.148.210.79) -- Tuesday, October 14 2003, 04:52 am

Thank you Pam...

Thank you Pam... your comments are always reassuring towards my writings..i'm glad that i am able to share the love that my husband and i shared. they all meant alot to me back then when i wrote them to him and they have doubled their meaning today as i share them ..i hope you enjoy the others i wrote to him just as well.....we all have that sesuality in us....sometimes we forget it is there..i forgot i had these feelings until i broke out all of my poems that i kept w/my husbands funeral packet...thank you for you sincere comments. Terrie*
 
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