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Come Take My Hand
7 October, 2003
Author: Terrie*

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take my hand
come follow me
it's time for you to put your worries aside
close your eyes
I know you had a rough day at work
empty all thoughts from your mind
give me your hand
let me pull off your boots
let's burn a little incense
join me in my lil' world of paradise
this is where I escape every now and then
remember what we shared when we first met?
well it meant the world to me
today is no different than the ones in the past
except that it won't be the last
I do this often when your not around
I close my eyes and I place you at my side
come a little closer my love
are ya ready for the journey to that graciaous enchanting place?
let me help you with a lil' massage
relax.....
as my hands start massaging the crown of your head.
towards your temple then, around your eyes
your cheeks, at the base of your chin
towards the back of your ears
your neck is very tense, a lil' massage will do the trick
don't forget... breath in the sweet sensual air
think of that heavenly spot we named Enchantment?
where we went to on our first date
. imagine yourself walking barefoot along that sandy ocean where we had been
can you feel the breeze?
can you feel it's coolness as it brushes against your skin?
I can feel it as I run my fingers thru you hair
relax your shoulders babe, as I deeply massage
I really love this time out with you
it helps take you away from your rough day at work
and it gives me the pleasure to enjoy this moment with you
I can feel the sand at my feet
the crispness of the water
as we walk along the shore
hear those waves as we walk on by
the music of the earth
that lies all around, presented by God
I can not compete with
this past year when you brought magic into my world
but...I can take time out to touch your world
as you have touched mine
you are the echo in my heart
you are etched there like a tattoo
I am falling in love with you
more so today
than any other yesterday
everything we explore...is such a unique experience
time is almost near for us to come back down to earth
we could go on forever
but...someone must answer the door
we will pick up at another time
I wish I was there with you right now
but,..I will be patient until you get off of work
I hope you enjoyed this lil' poem I snuck inside with your lunch
we will pick up on the massaging when you get home
Happy Anniversary Darling....I love you!

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Ben (67.124.45.103) -- Friday, October 10 2003, 12:03 am

Terrie*, That note in.....

Terrie*, That note in the lunch box must've burnt the sanwiches to a crisp and evaporated every bit of any liquid that was stored in there! This has me wondering if the whole thing didn't just melt a hole in the entire city block! Whoa! The company is on fire! Call 119 somebody!! Ha! Ha! Ha! Another epic poem from your journal of love! Thanks! ***Ben
Terrie* (65.136.7.160) -- Friday, October 10 2003, 01:13 am

Ben !

i guess it was a bit too much to share... huh?
:D P.S. i'll e-mail ya my reply:)
 
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