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A Friend I Found In Joe
29 August, 2003
Author: Terrie*

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A Friend I Found In Joe
everyday i pass him on the street
with a great big smile he greets
all his belongins are neatly kept,
you can tell for many days he hasn't slept.

. today i took the time to chat..
i went over where he sat
he has paid his wage,
he looks way beyond his age,

as he pushes his cart along the way,
collecting items we discard every day..
his sun beat skin so rugged and tough,
his body looks fragile to carry his stuff

his wrinkles show great detail,
a story of it's own to tell
of whom he was, where he's been
what he has become all he has seen

he tells me he was like the sand,
and now he blends in with the land..
he points to every wrinkle on his face,
he said he no longer runs in the race

he shares some photos w/me
he points out to what he wants me to see.
one picture looked like a mountain
but it was not
it was a close up he took of his face

his eyes appeared bluer than the sky,
and sparkled like the stars..
as he told me the story of his life,

he drew tears from my eyes..as he spoke.
he is a tiny man..whom refuses to fall
he stands proud and tall

he told me that on the day i don't see him pushing his cart down the street
to look up to the mountains and the trees

and allow my eyes to trace,
and find the sketch of his face
smiling upon the land
and praying for those that need a hand

he is one of many we may have forgotten
he is a son, father,brother,uncle,friend,
grandfather,godfather,neighbor,coworker
he could be anybody..he could be you or i

Joe had this glimmering shine in his eye
a tear drop forming before I hugged him good-bye
just as i was about to depart
I noticed a bit of sunshine in his heart.

and upon on his face he has a great big glowing smile
that can be detected from miles.

when i returned back the very next day
an act of kindness goes far and beyond
I look around ..I see the people respond

I fixed Joe and his friends a mighty feast
it was something I could do in the least
they told me that Joe went away

the man handed me a package that was great in size
it was addressed to the nurse, that was my angel in disguise

in the package was a rock he carried for many years
when all his family vanished
(it represented the most powerful possession he owned and carried,
his faith was as solid as that rock
along with the St. Christopher I gave him as a gift
he wrote "END OF THE LINE-LAST TRIP MZ. T"
God gave me a lift

it was signed and dated the same day
I THOUGHT NO WAY

I dropped to my knees
I looked beyond the mountains and trees
gave a great big smile
stayed with his friends for awhile

he was very much aware
he needed someone
the last precious moments to share

I told them you know Joe
he had such fine taste
he'd be upset if we let this meal go to waste

with tear drops in our eyes
the lump in our throats made it difficult to say good-bye

remember if you happen to see someone like Joe
take the time to say hello
it may be his first
but then it may be his last

he was a soldier in his time
and yet as a veteran
he was still battling the war
called society

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Comments on this poem/writing:

John (62.254.51.227) -- Tuesday, September 2 2003, 06:23 pm

thought provoking

Well written and thoughtful poem.......
Terrie* (65.148.213.79) -- Wednesday, September 3 2003, 12:01 am

appreciate your comments.........

John, thank you for commenting on this one as well.
there are so many veterans in our society that are left with no hope...because of them i have hope..i wish i can embrace them all and tell them that God will take care of them...Terrie*
Ben (67.123.245.73) -- Wednesday, September 3 2003, 12:18 am

Almost like a movie......

This one is almost like a movie, Terrie*! I could picture it and relate, because I have seen so many of these messed up "heros" over the years! Keep writing!
Terrie* (65.148.230.19) -- Wednesday, September 3 2003, 12:56 am

heros...

Ben. glad to hear ya liked this...yea isn't it just too sad to see such things that really shouldn't be....in a society like ours that forgets...T.Y Terrie*
barb (66.46.241.11) -- Friday, September 5 2003, 06:17 pm

great

Your compassion and understanding shows through your writing. Very good terrie keep feeling and understanding. Nice
Terrie* (65.136.6.32) -- Saturday, September 6 2003, 02:15 am

T.Y

Barb,alot of people that have crossed my path in life have touched my "life" just as all of you here on DREAMERS REALITY have....thank you for you comment...Terrie8
Martin Vann (171.75.209.73) -- Saturday, September 6 2003, 05:02 pm

With heart, soul & poet's pen, a film of life was born.

Terrie,

Obviously, I aggree with all the comments and Bens covered it accurately, I read this almost as a movie script without realizing it, perhaps, because I have lived part of it. Ther are a lot of Joe's & Janes out there and I'm sure they as I do, thank for thinking of them so beautifully.

Excellent work,

MartinV
P.S. this work expressed a great deal of maturiny and understanding, I really, appreicated this work from your heart.
Terrie* (65.148.215.50) -- Saturday, September 6 2003, 10:19 pm

appreciate your thoughtful comments.........

Martin, thank you1! for your thoughtful and most welcomed comments...i wish i would of known Joe for a much longer time......the very short time that i knew him. made a difference in my life..... he opened up my ignorant eyes/heart.perhaps that was his purpose in crossing my path......i am saddend and heart broken to learn that you lived part of it....i admire you for your unselfishness....you are one to look up to and admire....God Bless You!!!!Terrie
 
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