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Pain
Author: Terrie*

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pain can shread your heart
tear your life apart
no matter what your going thru
it can be cruel to you

it doesn't mean to be
but it's happening to me
i'm crying my eyes out
my heart wants to shout

the pain is like a weight
ready to destroy my fate
its up to me to defeat
and bounce back on my feet

to death i lost my man
but, i know GOD lead him by his hand...
that brings comfort to me
for his pain will no longer be.
not to be selfish,what about me?

i feel like a helpless dove..
he didn't mean to take away my only love
his need was greater up above...

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Comments on this poem/writing:

John (62.254.51.227) -- Thursday, September 4 2003, 01:48 pm

feelings

It is good to let your feelings out....chin up Terrie, you have friends...your writing shows your love.....John
Terrie* (65.136.7.48) -- Thursday, September 4 2003, 06:59 pm

thank you so much...

Thanx John, for you endearing comment... 12 years ago
i got... that rude wake up call...But...with God at my side..i survived.....Terrie*
 
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