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I Will Always Be There
22 August, 2003
Author: Terrie*

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i read your poem...
it makes me sigh...
i read another,
it makes me cry..

some i can relate,
others i hope i'm not too late..
i feel your pain,
it drives me insane...

i can not comfort you where you are,
your out of reach as the distant star...
i want to put you under my wing,
and stop that awful sting...

you matter to alot of us,
i and all will make a fuss...
there may be things i refuse to see,
but then that is only me...

sometimes i make myself blind,
but i do want to help calm your mind...
i want you to feel the warmth as i speak,
and if ever you feel weak...

on me you can depend,
i will be your forever friend...
let your tears flow freely from your face,
it is times of need i will invade your space...

so consider your self hugged,
when life gives ya a jolt of a tug...
all things are at such a craze,
life is a maze...

so...reach out for my hand,
know...that i understand...
we may have never meet,
our only connection may be the net...

your feelings are important to me,
no matter where you may be...
i want to help you thru,
when ever your feeling blue...

ya see this smile on my face?
ya put it there from beyond space...
i leave ya with this thought,
"God helped me conquer all the battles i once fought"

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Ben (67.124.46.110) -- Monday, August 25 2003, 07:22 am

Good one, Terrie, on.....

Good one, Terrie, on I Will Always Be There. I have felt the same. I really relate to what you're trying to send through CYBERSPACE! I have heard that words can hurt or heal. I do think healing is better!! Ha! Ha! Thanks!! (Good to see you back at Dreamer's, too!)
Ash (65.73.59.237) -- Monday, August 25 2003, 10:02 pm

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i have never read anything by you and i really liked this one. Keep writing!
Seizure (68.155.222.214) -- Tuesday, August 26 2003, 05:27 am

terrie

I like the way your writings flow. I think they come out nice... and for some reason when I read it, the words made it feel like you were talking to me. That's the way writings should be I think... make the reader think you're talking to them... abstract isn't my thing, and I can see it's not yours either. Good job again.
Martin Vann (171.75.220.142) -- Tuesday, August 26 2003, 03:48 pm

Obviously, you are a loving, giving person..,

Terrie,

Its comforting to know, no matter how far away, a lonely star may be, I think it shines, knowing there is shelter from all thatlife brings, sheltered by your loving wing! Now, that is friendship, like that a lot. I happy to know you through your words and I have "space," for more, keep them in orbit, the world needs love flowing around it.

MartinV
Terrie* (65.150.174.151) -- Wednesday, August 27 2003, 05:12 am

you all are fantastic....

Ben, Ash, Seiz & Martin...thank you all for taking a break from your life and tunning into my poem...i'm glad ya all liked it , this was written w/all of you in mind...it gives me great pleasure to have you all pay a comment to mine ...comparing them to yours ,mine are still trying to surface , shed a few layers....even after years of toying and brainstorming w/my words.... i still have to feel the effect w/out changing a phrase otherwise i end up destroying what my heart is trying to speak....usually when i write something... i have to feel the words that i want to express..believe it or not i really am a person of a few words.. .my poems unleash my inner-soul...i'd like to believe ...and i would hope... that others do see me as a loving/giving kind of individual..:) thank ya all once again...Terrie*
 
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