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Every Breath
24 June, 2003
Author: Terrie*

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Every morning,
I wake up
I thank God

For every breath that I take
I enjoy every detail
it's worst and finest

Misfortunes have taught me to be wise
Deaths made me strong
I've learned to love ,and it doesn't feel wrong

It taught me to pick myself up
And start all over again
At night before I go to bed

I continue to pray to God To remain with me
and bless every breath that i take
since ..i'm given a chance to love

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Enchantress (206.216.222.218) -- Monday, July 28 2003, 08:03 pm

Two Praises....

ONCORE! ONCORE! :D
Terrie* (65.142.45.160) -- Monday, July 28 2003, 10:17 pm

T.Y

Thank you for the dbl. praise Enchantress...i really appreciate it- Terrie*
John (62.254.51.227) -- Wednesday, July 30 2003, 11:01 am

Very nice

Well done Terrie...Remember, Tomorrow is the first day of the rest of your life.......
Ben (67.123.244.245) -- Sunday, August 3 2003, 08:07 am

For every breath.....

I relate to this expression of yours, Terrie. I like what it brings to mind...thankfulness for every breath. Thank you, it's a good reminder!
Terrie* (65.135.86.91) -- Thursday, August 21 2003, 03:58 am

tomorrow...

thank you..John & Ben...ya know i have plenty of tomorrows....when i run out of tomorrows i will live for that day & moment..thankful for you both and your comments..
Terrie*
joyce ivy (68.222.91.124) -- Friday, December 10 2004, 05:24 pm

ONCORE !!!

you've got it down here...my feelings exactly..I thank God for every breath I take...and for the chance to love again...thanks for sharing your feelings...
Terrie* (65.148.208.123) -- Saturday, December 11 2004, 12:35 am

Joyce, thank you...

thats why i gots to make sure every thing that comes out of my mouth is acceptable.....and i hope that everything that i share is appropriate.....heh...please note at the time i wrote this my true love was in the making..as i only knew of him...and could feel him...


until wallla....love broke lose in the spring of 20004

thanx girl...
Terrie* (65.148.208.123) -- Saturday, December 11 2004, 12:38 am

oops i meant ...

2004...c what love can do??...
it makes you forget how to spell LOL
Megan (152.163.100.74) -- Saturday, December 11 2004, 03:54 am

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Wow, this really puts things into perspective. Great Poem!
Terrie* (65.150.166.53) -- Saturday, December 11 2004, 06:44 am

Megan, your an angel with soft silky words...

you always say the sweetest things...
thank you my child...glad you like..

have a Beautifully Blessed Day !!
Terrie* (65.148.206.103) -- Sunday, December 12 2004, 12:39 am

Megan,thank you sooo much....

i will tune into your poetry..thanx for readin'/commentin' on mine
joyce ivy (68.222.91.124) -- Sunday, December 12 2004, 01:58 am

Great Terrie

I am proud for you..I am glad your heart has found some happiness...your poems so that have found that true love...love your work...thanks for sharing...
Terrie* (65.150.170.211) -- Sunday, December 12 2004, 10:23 am

Joyce, love is never lost.........

like my love says ..it shifts to another soul and starts new...thank you, my heart has always remained happy....God sent me someone to share it with....now i'm content and complete...he figured i was alone long enough..my kids are grown.. i took care of their needs first..now he made sure someone will take care of mine....


thanx for readin'/commentin'............
joyce ivy (68.222.91.124) -- Sunday, December 12 2004, 05:12 pm

Wonderful Terrie...

It is great to have your needs met...great work on your poem...love it..
your friend...
Joyce
 
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