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Broken Dreams
29 May, 2002
Author: Tessa

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Stuck inside a dream
Lost without a care
Forget the reality
Now i'm swimming in despair
I thought i had it all
But it was all just a lie
No time for self sorrow
no tears left that i can cry
The past comes back to haunt me
Ringing through my head
Don't try to save me
For i am already dead
It's the perfect form of pain
the only thing thats true
Are all those broken dream
That I can finally see through
I try so hard to reach
My soul crawling on the flooor
The taste of freedom is all i need
to keep coming back for more

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Meridian (152.163.253.8) -- Thursday, July 1 2004, 07:33 pm

Great poetry!

I love your rhyming Tessa! You elaborate so well in your poetry verses.... Good job Tessa!

Smiles,
Meridian
Kasie (69.250.4.200) -- Saturday, January 22 2005, 06:37 pm

Awsome!

Your poem is so awsome! Fantastic job!!! -Kasie
Ateru Nightshade (63.131.217.98) -- Friday, April 27 2007, 03:55 pm

your poems Speak to my heart

I just Broke up with my wife of Two years and this poem really embodied the feelings that is going on right now
Keep up the Great work
 
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