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He Stains In The Rain
19 May, 2003
Author: Texas

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he stands in the rain,
his chest filled with pain,
they where there in the night,
he actually lasted through the fight,
with his gun in his hand,
he stood up for his man,
that shot at each other,
taking out the others brother,
he stands in rain,
and that pain,
its a bullet in his chest.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

ryan (66.136.198.179) -- Saturday, March 29 2003, 06:50 am

blew me away kyle

wow i dont know what to say i really like the way i know thats what u are thinking wow ummm its great kyle keep writing whats on ur mind

love your brother,ryan
Leah06 (12.232.5.189) -- Monday, March 31 2003, 05:35 am

Whoa!!!!

Awsome! I loved this poem. Kyle, great work. Keep up the spirit and i salute you and your poem. (i am a drumm major) Good job.
 
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