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No Friend To The Hood
Author: Texas

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im no friend to the hood,
its not a place of any sort of good,
i know the streets,
ive heard those beats,
if seen brawls and gun fights,
but its worse when ive seen them light up the night,
so to the hood your not my friend,
im glad i put that life to an end

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Roy (64.12.96.70) -- Thursday, May 1 2003, 08:11 pm

Great

You got the right rap
texas (24.153.177.14) -- Thursday, May 1 2003, 10:32 pm

meant to be

it was meant to be longer but i lost my thought in the middle of it so maybe later ill finish if the ppl want more
vanessa (63.224.144.98) -- Thursday, May 1 2003, 10:52 pm

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i think your poem is of the hook.
luc (68.74.156.12) -- Friday, May 2 2003, 01:33 am

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yeah but its the life of those that make our wourld go 'roud weather you choose to belive it or not..
Alexis (65.139.95.254) -- Saturday, May 3 2003, 03:38 am

I Want More

It was really good, and it related to me; so maybe you could finish it off, because me and my friends love it. so finish it off please, thanx luvz. Alexis
shiloh (74.65.121.49) -- Tuesday, July 22 2008, 04:53 am

just found this...

and i agree... you have to finish it, add to it, build another... whatever - do not stop - you're that good. bring it around some more, bring it around again. peace...
 
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