No Friend To The Hood
im no friend to the hood,
its not a place of any sort of good,
i know the streets,
ive heard those beats,
if seen brawls and gun fights,
but its worse when ive seen them light up the night,
so to the hood your not my friend,
im glad i put that life to an end
Comments on this poem/writing:
|Roy (220.127.116.11) -- Thursday, May 1 2003, 08:11 pm|
You got the right rap
|texas (18.104.22.168) -- Thursday, May 1 2003, 10:32 pm|
it was meant to be longer but i lost my thought in the middle of it so maybe later ill finish if the ppl want more
|vanessa (22.214.171.124) -- Thursday, May 1 2003, 10:52 pm|
i think your poem is of the hook.
|luc (126.96.36.199) -- Friday, May 2 2003, 01:33 am|
yeah but its the life of those that make our wourld go 'roud weather you choose to belive it or not..
|Alexis (188.8.131.52) -- Saturday, May 3 2003, 03:38 am|
It was really good, and it related to me; so maybe you could finish it off, because me and my friends love it. so finish it off please, thanx luvz. Alexis
|shiloh (184.108.40.206) -- Tuesday, July 22 2008, 04:53 am|
and i agree... you have to finish it, add to it, build another... whatever - do not stop - you're that good. bring it around some more, bring it around again. peace...
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