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Insomniacs Dream
21 April, 2003
Author: Texas

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he lies there wake he cant sleep.
thinking of the girl he once loved.
he cant sleep because she haunts his dreams.
even as he sits there awake she still haunts his dreams.
i guess its what theyd call an insominac dream.

he sits there completly still, god his mind is clouded,its happening again
she is in his thoughts. she takes over his mind he cant control himself
all the emotions come out at once. he cant think, he is a mess
why did she do it to him break his heart like a porcelain doll.
with all disregard of how he felt.
she ran off with his friend.
seems there in love now.
and whats he left with nothing but an insominac dream

he lies there again.
thinking of her again.
she still haunts his dreams.
now there is a new girl in his dreams.
but this is different he loves her
she would never hurt him.
now he sleeps no longer bothered by those once insominac dreams.
but now he dreams of a life lived with her.
he doesnt know what he would do with out her.
he now has new dreams.
even the insomniac dreams come back but these dont haunt him
he actually enjoys them when they come around.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Crystal (206.214.69.71) -- Tuesday, April 22 2003, 01:16 pm

Really liked this one!

This poem was really soft and adventurous somehow, I really like the second part of this poem. Great job!
LinzAy (205.188.208.44) -- Tuesday, April 22 2003, 02:51 pm

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Like it!...i like the whole idea of it...an insomniac dreaming.......wish i had thought of this....

Good writing....:D
Leah05 (12.232.5.189) -- Tuesday, April 22 2003, 05:06 pm

Nice Poem!

I liked this poem. Like crystal said it is very adventurous and at the same time sad and heart braking. Nice work.
Tarna (63.65.186.92) -- Thursday, April 24 2003, 05:32 am

mhmm

good poem about moving on and how it can heal the heart.. good poem Texas
 
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