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It Was All A Dream
Author: Texas

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I had a dream.
was it real?
heres how it started,
an arguement started,
just cause he was acting retarted,
wouldnt you know it thats when the fun started,
the guy pulled out a gun,
clicked the hammer back,
he tried to push that fact,
that is was just a rap,
and he didnt mean anything by that crap,
it was just a rap battle,
now in the guys had is the gun rattle,
he knew it was loaded,
but he found out for sure when the gun exploded,
i woke up with a burn in my chest,
is it sign? should i get out the hood?

------- Author's Notes -------

not a real dream, already out the hood

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Comments on this poem/writing:

gg (24.72.92.94) -- Sunday, April 13 2003, 06:20 am

ggg

I'm glad your out of the hood
gg (24.72.92.94) -- Sunday, April 13 2003, 06:20 am

ggg

I'm glad your out of the hood
lulu (216.28.152.111) -- Monday, June 30 2003, 11:22 pm

i know

i can understand and relate to that because my brother went through something like that and it was no dream and we got too.great poem.
lulu (216.28.152.111) -- Monday, June 30 2003, 11:22 pm

i know

i can understand and relate to that because my brother went through something like that and it was no dream and we got out too.great poem.
 
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