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Now This Is Love
6 March, 2003
Author: Texas

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now this is love.
a guy and a girl just laying there,
they are perfectly content.
they stare into each others eyes,
they can tell what the other is thinking.
they are happy, playfully joking and kissing,
now this is love.
they dont have to be out spending money to have fun,
they just have to be together.
they do anything to not move.
they slowly drift off to sleep together.
now that is love

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Comments on this poem/writing:

MartinV (63.208.45.107) -- Wednesday, March 19 2003, 03:02 pm

Now, your talking Texas, this is good

Hey Texas, I'm from Texas to. I enjoyed this poem much more than I did, "I guess This Is Love." This has warmth, consideration and that nice soft, touch. Continue to write like this and I'll continue to enjoy them. Nothing wrong with expressing what you really, feel, I just enjoyed this pomem much more.

Thanks, MartinV
texas (24.153.177.14) -- Thursday, March 20 2003, 04:41 am

thanks

thanks this is one of my happier poems i guess. it just popped up in my head when i was looking around at my other comments so its not great but thanks
anonymous (12.247.126.89) -- Wednesday, April 9 2003, 03:16 am

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I'm in love with you in every way,
I think about you every day.
My trembling heart is in your hands,
Don't let it slip through like grains of sand.
Your silky hair flowing round your head,
Those pouty lips of cherry red,
Your smooth, creamy legs and thighs,
Those deep, mysterious, dark blue eyes,
The sight of your beauty makes me sigh,
But when you're gone I want to cry.
I'm so glad I fell in love,
I truly think you're sent from above.
I hope and pray you feel this way,
Because without you, my life is gray.
 
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