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Dreams Of Life
Author: Texas

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He lays there and dreams of a life
of him with two kids and a wife.
as a the car drives away he listens to the bass.
trying to hold on to this last look on of his friends face.
he dreams of times when he was a kid
running, shouting, and all the other stuff they did.
he dreams of life lived not on the fast paced streets
where money doesnt come from drugs and phat beats
he lies on the street bullet hole in his chest
he thinks "damn i knew i should have worn my vest"
all he hears is everyone crying
as he drifts away slowly dying
with his last breath he tells his friend
"get two kids and a wife
then get out this thug life."

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Comments on this poem/writing:

lasohnda harris (12.229.199.53) -- Saturday, March 8 2003, 07:55 pm

oh

thats touching i like it
ryan (24.153.177.14) -- Saturday, March 8 2003, 09:27 pm

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i really like it very touching whos biggin?
Zak (62.254.113.135) -- Monday, March 17 2003, 09:34 pm

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Its wonderful, I truelly like it. I have read a long poem about someone dieing and stuff and they always touch me, keep up the wonderful work
Zak
Chuck (207.103.166.34) -- Tuesday, May 13 2003, 03:16 pm

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touching
Scott Shaw (216.36.137.5) -- Friday, March 5 2004, 04:09 pm

Good

Extremly good poem of what could actuallyhappen in life
Scott Shaw (216.36.137.5) -- Friday, March 5 2004, 04:10 pm

Good

Extremly good poem of what could actually happen in life, and very touching
Dimitri Price (207.73.190.1) -- Thursday, March 18 2004, 05:20 pm

good poem seems like real life

seems like real life
Dimitri Price (207.73.190.1) -- Thursday, March 18 2004, 05:21 pm

good

seems like real life
Dimitri Price (207.73.190.1) -- Thursday, March 18 2004, 05:22 pm

good

seems like real life
 
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