He pulls you into his web,
sucks the blood right out of you,
He fiddles with your head,
Feeding you all that was said,
You are now his victim of the dead,
Your flesh and bones,
Burning like rubber,
The fire glazing at you,
Tearing your insides into shreds.
Don't be fooled by the devil,
For he has his ways,
on those certain days,
Where he finds his victims,
Of the soon to be dead.
Don't be fooled by the devils ways.
Comments on this poem/writing:
|Liat (220.127.116.11) -- Thursday, October 24 2002, 12:53 pm|
LoL i am just playin girl it is an awsome poem love you bunches my lover i miss you i want you yeah baby ...yeah baby <edited>( j/p )
|Luc (18.104.22.168) -- Thursday, October 24 2002, 04:49 pm|
looks like someone was having fun this morning...o.0
nice poem, sounded like a vampire thingy in the bigning of the poem. then towards the end sounded like something a preacher would say. nice combination. ^.^
oh and uh like some people(girls) might say "you go girl!" uh yeah anyways.
|Tiffany (22.214.171.124) -- Thursday, October 24 2002, 06:59 pm|
Hey pj Ha HA HA HA Ha!!!!!
Your so funny! I hope you are lookin at this comment right now! Anywayz girl good luck with chris and thanks for commenting me on my poem! see you in school!<edited>
|LinzAy (126.96.36.199) -- Thursday, October 24 2002, 11:35 pm|
This was a well combined poem like she said up there and i liked it. And here goes the random thing about this comment...Luc, u ever live in GA?
|Luc (188.8.131.52) -- Friday, October 25 2002, 04:04 am|
have i ever lived in ga? nope. i've lived in ca il and in but never in ga. <HR
<B>LinzAy </B> (184.108.40.206)
|Tiffany (220.127.116.11) -- Friday, October 25 2002, 07:33 pm|
whats jw? (just wondering)
|Luc (18.104.22.168) -- Sunday, October 27 2002, 10:31 pm|
yup its just wondering. ^.^
|Lori Ann Day (22.214.171.124) -- Thursday, March 6 2003, 09:09 am|
I think I've dated the devil!
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