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Should I Tell Him
Author: Tiffany

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He looks at me,and waits for me to speak.
Should i tell him?
I look at him, and start to speak.
But nothing comes out.
He turns away,and starts to walk.
I tried to tell him but nothing came out.
He keeps walking,
i just stood there.
I should of told him.
But wait,he comes back.
Should i tell him.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

luc (67.37.236.62) -- Wednesday, October 23 2002, 08:13 pm

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suspence. lovely. not much of a comment writer :|
Tiffany (68.10.181.250) -- Wednesday, October 23 2002, 09:46 pm

Thanks

Thanks i'm not much of a comment person either. It's hard to get me to comment on anybodys work. I think i submited a comment on 2 or your poems not sure. anyways thanks for the comment luc.
Seizure (68.155.218.237) -- Thursday, October 24 2002, 06:25 am

I liked it

It was good. I'm about to read a few more.
Tiffany (68.10.181.250) -- Thursday, October 24 2002, 07:03 pm

honor

Oh my god hearing that comment come out of you it's such an honor! you are such an amazing poet. Thank you so much! you deffinitly made my day! hugs and kisses ~Tiffany
mental (66.153.165.47) -- Friday, October 25 2002, 03:59 am

mental's comment

ah, the shock of somebody you care for just walking away. (but depends on what you were going to say i guess) short simple and to the point it said what you wanted to say. very well out excellent
tiffany (216.54.14.84) -- Friday, October 25 2002, 02:20 pm

L.o.L

you took the words right out of my mouth. Thank you you know it would be cool to hang with you anywayz love the penname. well gotta go just got in trouble in school ha dont care.
Mappy The Klown (24.107.137.153) -- Tuesday, September 9 2003, 10:57 pm

nice

This is a really sweeeet poem. write more =)!
 
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