This passion is burning deep within,
Torching my heart as though some deep sin,
No pain or hurt, nor slightest regret,
But the passion grows stronger by every moment,
Hours ago my soul wrought in hell,
Yet who better to save me then my dearest ang'el?
My weak ravaged heart strived just to go on,
Yet passionate words flowed as the sweetest song,
Through our love i hope to ammend,
For my passion for you, shall burn to no end.
Comments on this poem/writing:
|RubyDragon (22.214.171.124) -- Wednesday, May 21 2003, 09:50 am|
I like the way you have worded this poem, for some reason it makes me feel like I was close to giving in, but now I don't want to. Excellent wrting
|LinzAy (126.96.36.199) -- Friday, May 23 2003, 03:23 am|
|Bench (188.8.131.52) -- Saturday, May 24 2003, 07:48 am|
Wods came together like they were meant to be. I love how the words gush like water out my mouth as I read your poem aloud! Nice!
|luc (184.108.40.206) -- Sunday, May 25 2003, 04:03 pm|
it flowed nicely indeed. good poem aj..
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