Sad Times
10 November, 2003
Author: Tonya
Everytime I sob, the tears fall down for you.
Everytime I cry out loud, no one has a clue.
I'am so depressed without you my love,
I'am falling into a dark hole.
I can't eat, sleep, or smile, it's out of my control.
I need you so much, but your far away.
I'll cry until I see you, each and every day.
I know now that you never know what will happen with death.
But until the day I saw your face I had not yet taken
my first living breath.
Just know that I love you more than anyone can possibly
know.
My love for you will never die, it will always continue to grow
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| Silkened Moon (206.216.224.33) -- Thursday, November 13 2003, 01:23 am I liked the last line :"My love for you will never die, it will always continue to grow". How poe`tic, how beautiful, how colorful. This poem was showing the sad times in a very beautiful way of words. Nice job Tonya! |
| anonymous (205.188.209.40) -- Tuesday, November 18 2003, 03:46 am i relate to this poem alot because my frist love killed himself when he was 16 years old. and well this brought tears to my eyes reminding me of him! very good |
| wesley (65.15.185.232) -- Friday, December 17 2004, 07:22 am i feel exactly the same way...... |
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