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Ss Jesse
Author: Tricia

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SS Jesse is a lonely one man ship,
lost out in the deep blue sea.

Visited by the sea's mermaids,
enchanted by their songs and luring
him deeper into the dark abyss.

As he searches for his lost love,
he falls for a mermaid.
Her eyes are deep and pationate.
Full of filling, eyes that can melt a mans heart,
steal his sole and burn his thoughts.

She steals away his dreams, and haunts his thoughts.
Just a glance thats all it took, for SS Jesse to be lost
lost in love.
His mind filled with the love he once felt, the love he
had once yearned for.
Yearning for the life which is past, the life in which lays abroad.
The one that was once his morning glory,afternoon sunshine,
his evening star, as well as his late night moon left with
out warning.

SS Jesse not knowing what to do,
what to think, his words are like poetry
to the mermaid, with the auburn hair, and deep green eyes.

SS Jesse torn between what is right, what he should do
and what the future beholds for him.
The sweet lost innocence of a long love lost, or the power
of the passionate love which awaits him.

SS Jesse awaits for his destiny in the deep blue sea.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Meridian (152.163.252.196) -- Monday, March 1 2004, 06:53 pm

Romanticism and creativeness

I can envision this poem as my eyes run pass the above lines. The man and the merimaid. I like that one!!!
So much detail, and style, and etc. This poem is beyond words! Wonderful poem Tricia!!!
Meridian (152.163.252.196) -- Monday, March 1 2004, 06:54 pm

Romanticism and creativeness

I can envision this poem as my eyes run pass the above lines. The man and the mermaid. I like that one!!!
So much detail, and style, and etc. This poem is beyond words! Wonderful poem Tricia!!!
Tricia (206.230.22.79) -- Monday, March 1 2004, 07:28 pm

Thank you Meridian

Thank you so much meridian, i took a real life situation with a friend of mine and made a poem to express feelings and the mix of love and devotion. Ty for your feedback.
Meridian (152.163.252.196) -- Monday, March 1 2004, 11:57 pm

You're so vrey welcome Tricia!

You have a wonderful talent, and I hope I'll be hearing from more!!! I commend you!!! Nicely written!!

Meridian
 
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