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Unknown Life
11 September, 2003
Author: Tricia

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In the midst of the day
your orders change.
This life we know is untold.
Of the trials we live, the dangers we face.

One hour your coming home,
the next you must stay gone.
They say 365 days he must stay.
Not a day earlier but maybe a date late.

Its your job yes I know,
But do they care about your family
you left back home?
The tears we cry each night and
the candles in which we light.

The plans I make for the unknown life
I will take.
The life of a soldier wife.

We dream of a life in which we will plan,
But being a soldier and a wife, we have an unknown life.
Together we shall travel to far distant lands, fighting
battle after battle right beside one another.

You and I living the life of unknown. Together forever!!

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Megan (205.188.209.14) -- Sunday, September 14 2003, 06:45 am

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This poem almost hits home for me. My cousin is over seas with the war and his wife just gave birth to his second daughter... well your a good poet , I hope to read more from you.
-Megan-
Terrie* (65.148.233.102) -- Monday, September 15 2003, 10:33 pm

Tricia

today, i went back to read and absorb ALL the poetry that you ave posted..and i found them all to be such a delight than you for sharing....
Tricia (206.230.22.15) -- Tuesday, September 16 2003, 12:04 am

Megan and Terrie

Thank you both for you feed back. Means alot. God bless
Tricia
anonymous (24.205.215.52) -- Sunday, February 27 2005, 02:00 pm

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good poem, but i gotta say... they all care where your soldier's at... most who make the decisions... are soldiers too. its our price to pay, our burden to carry, to love the ones who get sent away
Kyra Lanier (69.133.159.204) -- Thursday, June 28 2007, 11:02 pm

Made me cry

i am only 13 but i do know my poetry and my mom is gone but keep prayin
Tricia (69.18.236.199) -- Saturday, June 30 2007, 02:27 am

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