Those We Love
Author: Tricia


We work and work with each day.
We never stop to play.
We are busy, running here and there,
Never taking time to care.
For those we love.

When we had a second or two to call and say I love you,
We always had something else to do. Never taking the time to.
Then when the one(s) you love are sent away, you think of them each day.
With each passing day, you think of what you wish you had done.
Those you love, those who loved you, take the time to make a call, or write a letter.
For when your loved ones are gone you'll never have the chance.

so stop a moment take a breath thank god for putting those you love in your life. Make a phone call tell some one your thinking of them and love them. They will be so happy to hear from you im sure.


Comments on this poem/writing:

Enchantress ( -- Tuesday, September 2 2003, 11:35 pm

SO TRUE!!!!! :)

So true at what the message is in the poem, I think it really applies to everyone who HAS lost someone they love. Even those who lost someone by death, very nice job! I loved it!
Ben ( -- Tuesday, September 2 2003, 11:40 pm

In agreement with Enchantress....

In agreement with Enchantress, Tricia I enjoyed this subect matter and your treatment of it! Thank you, and Keep writing!!
Ash ( -- Friday, September 12 2003, 06:29 pm

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This was really beautiful. I loved it.
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