You Left Me
Author: Tricia


I'm still standing in this doorway.
To weak to move, to weak to cry.
The tears should fall,
but they have fallen so many times before.
You left me, standing here.
A soft kiss, a firm hug and a quick I LOVE YOU.
Is all I received.
You left me here to go on with out you by my side.
I cry each night in hopes of you safety.
You left me with hopes of marriage when you return.
You left me here in this God forsaken land.
You left me with nothing but a simple goodbye and i love you
You left me, but God is by myside keeping me strong.
While I wait for you!


Comments on this poem/writing:

Katrina ( -- Friday, July 11 2003, 06:42 pm

Be Strong

Beautifully written, and I hope you don't have to wait much longer!
Tricia ( -- Wednesday, July 23 2003, 07:08 pm


Thank you so much for your feed back. It means alot.
God Bless
brandy ( -- Tuesday, August 31 2004, 02:39 am


ur poem is really good!!!
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