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Please God Forgive Me
9 October, 2003
Author: Tzuhsi

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Please God forgive me for what I've done
I tried to play this game
But I have not yet won
Everyday I fight this war
Yet no matter what I do
I just can't take it
Not anymore
I know what I'm about to do is a sin
But I continue to think about it
Again and again
I've never been able to do things right
This time I will
I will show you tonight
I've looked and looked for an easy way out
Now I found it
Without a doubt
Grab the box and take out the gun
Put it to my head
One shot and I will be dead
Please God forgive me for what I've done
I knew what I was to do
When I found that gun

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Timothy Reynolds (216.165.188.242) -- Saturday, October 11 2003, 05:36 pm

One More Day

He forgives sin, blots it away!
Smiles on His child, And gives a new day.
Try one more time, what does it matter?
Maybe tomorrow, put trust in The Ladder!
mental (66.153.164.250) -- Sunday, November 23 2003, 04:52 am

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they say you don't go to heaven when you take your own life. you kind of get caught in betwween somewhere.
cristina Robledo (206.78.213.254) -- Wednesday, May 14 2008, 07:31 pm

It's NOt A SIN..............

Its not a SIN God forgives everyone what they do trust everyone in this world had done stupid things before and it got to do with SIN...
no one is perfect in this world...
 
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