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Is This What You Wanted
30 August, 2003
Author: Tzuhsi

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Don't turn your back
Don't walk away
I am begging you to stay
I want you to see
What you have done to me
All the pain you caused
I have hidden within
Now I will show you
So here I begin
Roll up my sleeves
And look at these
Scars from the past
When things got to good to last
Look at the new ones all over me
Is this what you really wanted for me
Cut from bottom to top
All this pain you could have stopped
Why did you curse me so
Do I deserve it
Tell me
I want to know
My life has been like a roller coaster ride
With a few happy memories
And a lot more pain inside

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mental (66.153.164.250) -- Sunday, November 23 2003, 04:55 am

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i just now discovered you a couple of day's a go and i like how you write you give me those feelings when i write my stuff thanks. i'm very impressed.
 
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