Dark Clouds Of Hurt by Whitfield

Every time your wind blows
Its like a cold shiver down my spine
Every time you’re dark cloud rains
I feel every cold rain drop on my face

Why is it like this?
Why are your emotions like…
Like a whirlpool of hate and confusion
Or a tornado sucking every last bit of life out of me
All I no is pain
All I feel is despair

Stop this
Stop this hurricane of fear
Not actually knowing when its going to hit me
Like the sharp blade of a guillotine
Hanging over my head
Just waiting
Just praying
That every last breathe….
Will be my last.

Meridian (205.188.209.135) -- Tuesday, March 16 2004, 07:19 pm

Thriller!!
You're good Whitfield! You're the dangerous kind of good. Good, bone-chilling poem!

whitfield (unknown) -- Monday, March 29 2004, 02:01 pm

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thnk you meridian im glad that you like my poems and i will be looking forward to more comments from you

pandora (82.34.12.7) -- Thursday, March 17 2005, 01:48 pm

i feel your pain
so this is hurt and pain its a bit depressing but its very good and very powerful i like it i kind of know were your comeing from so i feel what your writeing you will have to show me more i would love to see them
pandora(kel)-x-

Jim (193.60.218.253) -- Thursday, December 8 2005, 01:39 pm

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I feel the pain to man, i feel it

Hareth (193.60.218.253) -- Tuesday, December 13 2005, 06:45 pm

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I can empathise with this Dave, you are extremely deep *hugs*

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