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Hatetrid
10 February, 2004
Author: Whitfield

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I hate you.
I hate you.
I hate you.
Why are you always there?
You never leave me alone
All I want is to run from you
But yet you always find me.

Why wont you leave me alone
You tell me im always wrong
We always seem to argue
Yet we cannot part
We are in this together
Forever
Until the end of time

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Comments on this poem/writing:

heaven (68.43.99.209) -- Sunday, February 15 2004, 02:48 am

.................

i feel the same way u do about my mom.this is very real.-heaven
whitfield (unknown) -- Monday, March 29 2004, 02:03 pm

...

thank you for the comment.
pandora (82.34.12.7) -- Thursday, March 17 2005, 02:09 pm

we all feel this

so if this one's aimed at your mum i can understand were your coming from we all feel this way from time to time but she will always be there for you at the end of the day and love you and as long as your happy with yourself thats all that matters
pandora(kel)-x-
whitfield (195.99.241.26) -- Friday, March 18 2005, 01:55 pm

no title

this poem was not aimed at my mother
it was aimed at my self
pandora (82.34.241.201) -- Friday, March 25 2005, 01:33 pm

ok

ok i get it now its just heaven said it was aimed at your mum cool so its aimed at yourself i think thats better and its really good i kind of fell this way sometimes to
carla (193.60.218.253) -- Tuesday, December 13 2005, 06:44 pm

me2

i know its about you honey. i feel the same sometimes. its just great that you can put into words better than i can. xxxxxx
frances (168.221.143.100) -- Thursday, June 21 2007, 03:22 pm

question

may i use your poem
pista (76.71.251.117) -- Thursday, May 15 2008, 12:20 am

hatrid

good hatrid poem buh i could make a better one
 
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