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Thirst
Author: Whitfield

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I can feel it oozing from the sides of my mouth
I can taste it sweet yet bitter at the same time
Thicker than water
Lighter than air
This strange substance
People call blood

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pandora (82.34.12.7) -- Thursday, March 17 2005, 12:30 pm

very good i like it

i like your poetie its really good i like this one its really dark and evil and i love vampire's and bitting and drinking from someone very me but i do think the ending could be worked on to sound better it dont go that well
pandora(kel)-x-
whitfield (195.99.241.26) -- Friday, March 18 2005, 12:56 pm

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yeah i know this one needsore work
im not a big fan of this one really but it was the first thing i wrote
 
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