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Helpless
Author: Bench

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I don't know what you want from me
You have gotten it all
I gave you my everything
My back is against the wall.

You have scorned me, hurt me
Yet I did not hate you for that
I helped you move on
While I am stuck here in a rut.

I hate it when you demand
Answers to your questions
That you can only answer
Not even considering my suggestions.

I love you
I hate you
I don't know what to do.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

ashley nb (12.222.12.163) -- Wednesday, May 21 2003, 02:39 am

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''I hate it when you demand answers..." i like that stanza. it connects with my own feelings i have at times. good job
CrYsTaL (216.63.217.252) -- Wednesday, May 21 2003, 04:39 pm

Awwwwwwwwwwwsome!

Nice one, Bench! I really enjoyed this one, kind of one of those "confusing" poems, huh? (LOL)
 
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