Daddy
18 December, 2003
Author: Your Melody
It hasn't quite registered yet,
But the smiles are quickly fading from right before the set.
Everything was so simple before,
That fatefuly time of 12:24.
My daddy is now no longer here,
Only because he picked up his keys after that Gosh-forsaken beer.
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| KitKatrina (68.113.60.103) -- Friday, December 19 2003, 10:47 pm If this is true, I am so sorry. I know what it's like to lose a father. Good poem, keep it up! |
| Your Melody (207.190.93.32) -- Saturday, December 20 2003, 11:07 pm Yes this poem is true. Thank you for your comments Kat. |
| Brunette (198.81.26.42) -- Monday, January 17 2005, 10:13 pm I'm very sorry about this, I cant say i know what its like cause i dont but i do know what itsd like to have a father who drinks and smokes a lot. |
| Kaylee Thornock (163.6.254.139) -- Friday, November 23 2007, 07:30 pm I am sorry that this happened to you! I have had the same thing happen to me too(except for my dad's story was with drugs!). It really does suck. I hope that you are getting over it though. Just know that it's not your fault! ok? |
| Gabriela (205.188.116.201) -- Monday, October 13 2008, 09:42 pm I am so sorry about whathappened to your dad. But it will be okay!!!!!!!! =( =( =( =( |
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