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16 December, 2003
Author: Your Melody

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Crystal hearts and rainbow tears
Yesterday has past and it seems like years.
I can look at the world around me and not see any of it
Except memories of tomorrow being pieced together bit by bit.
I feel like I'm shrinking away so fast and so true
My thoughts constinately flee my mind everything I always knew.
In the still of the night as raindrops fall
The words "never lose faith" I'm quick to recall.
Voices in my mind replay
"Make all your days happy" they always use to say.
Life was always so simply sweet
But this cycle is excrutiatingly hard to beat.
I float through my world as if it's all a dream
Only seeing beatuy in black and white or so it's always going to seem.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Shorty (209.84.125.67) -- Thursday, December 18 2003, 04:59 am

Good Job!

Hey!
I really like ur poem, i think you did a really good jod with it! Keep Writing!
Your Melody (207.190.93.167) -- Friday, December 19 2003, 03:55 am

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Thanx a lot for your comments. I was actually trying to keep my thoughts off someone, when I came up with the first line and couldn't think of anything else to write. Finally it all just came. Again, thanx for your comments.
 
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