To The Poets
Author: Your Melody


W rite
Why is it so hard to make a simple ryhme?
My thoughts are all a gumble
no longer sweet and humble
Inside my pweeny mind
the messages don't turn out too kind
All my signals are getting crossed
and most, eventually do get lost
The words used to come so kindly
now nothing quite turns out timely.
I feel like a mime whose lost all expression
a poet without words
I drop my pencil
the papers fly
And now I think it's time to say, "Good-bye."


Comments on this poem/writing:

Terrie* ( -- Tuesday, October 21 2003, 06:27 am

Absolutely not a good bye.......

Don't give up melody...your beginning to sound like me when i work 16 hr shifts :) lets go on to a serious poets our words are not always gong to come to us when we want them just like an artist they cannot just go up to their canvas and paint..we have to be things we see people we meet..memories...emotions we go thru..were all patient sweetie..take a break yes..but..good-bye no!....take a life everything takes time in order to savour the best...we are all going to be patient and wait for your next posting..
Your Melody ( -- Tuesday, October 21 2003, 11:43 pm

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Thanx for the encouraging words Terrie. I see things every day that inspire me, but, i don't know, i just don't feel the need to write anymore. It's strange, the one thing that saved my life before, is now the first thing to leave once I get everything straightened out again. Whatever happens, i'm sure you'll all be patient. Thank God for that. This short little dinky poem took me about 3 days in itself to write, just because I could never seem to get it right. Anyways this is getting kinda long, so i'll just say thanx for sticking by me, and til next. Luv Your Melody
Terrie* ( -- Wednesday, October 22 2003, 04:31 am


God Bless You & Good Luck to you...Your Melody.
you may have a greater challenge waiting out there ...change is good...
Your Melody ( -- Tuesday, October 28 2003, 02:23 am

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Yes Change is good. I'm not so sure about the challenging part though. Thanx for being there Terrie. It means the most. Forever and always, Your Melody
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