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I Hate You
Author: Your Melody

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I hate you because you're never around
I hate you because of all of the drugs
I hate you because you act like your 16 again
I hate you because you hurt mommy
I hate you because you hurt me
I hate you because you ruined our family
I hate you because you just lost your job
I hate you because you wanna come back
I hate you because you know you can't
I hate you becuase you're always in jail
I hate you because you still love me
More over, I hate you because I still love you.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

luc (68.74.144.240) -- Saturday, July 12 2003, 03:35 pm

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that last line was a surprise. and i liked it very much. :)
cryptic child (64.91.148.140,) -- Friday, August 22 2003, 12:52 am

sup

Hey,
Ive been going around different sites checking shit out..and yours was tight. It was really good. I dont' know if thats what youve been wanting to hear or if you just wanted to express yourself and should people what went on in the past..but either way I think you did a great job showing what you went through. later
Your Melody (207.190.93.149) -- Saturday, August 23 2003, 02:12 am

thanx

cryptic child and luc, thanx a lot for your comments. they really mean a lot to me. I post my poems on this site beause I want to hear what other people think, so I can become a better writer and also just to express myself, I always love getting comments telling me what others think of my poems, thanx again. laterz
danny (87.102.13.161) -- Thursday, October 19 2006, 06:00 pm

let me

can i paste your poem at the top for my home work i think its cool pleeeeaaaaasssssseeeeeee
 
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